tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1951975576417424574.post4665983223081309919..comments2023-11-05T16:40:01.821+08:00Comments on Loud Cloud: The Shameless Re-fabrication Of Fictionloudcloudhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12471466069878867104noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1951975576417424574.post-43787605132819582722007-12-31T15:41:00.000+08:002007-12-31T15:41:00.000+08:00thanks talksmart! may 2008 will have your site fer...thanks talksmart! may 2008 will have your site fertile with discovering bloggers of note!loudcloudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12471466069878867104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1951975576417424574.post-42617017882278728122007-12-31T08:53:00.000+08:002007-12-31T08:53:00.000+08:00Thanks for leaving a note on my blog. May you neve...Thanks for leaving a note on my blog. May you never get tired writing good posts. You inspire a lot of bloggers, truly.talkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17070311476345106340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1951975576417424574.post-14793814159377226862007-12-30T15:14:00.000+08:002007-12-30T15:14:00.000+08:00you were right on the dot on the journal-writing b...you were right on the dot on the journal-writing bit. it's a blog inside her mind. as for the plot, i dunno. it's a mishmash, pretty fucked. hehe. we shall seeloudcloudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12471466069878867104noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1951975576417424574.post-64870811709958495602007-12-30T07:47:00.000+08:002007-12-30T07:47:00.000+08:00ok, read it. hmmm...if it's supposed to be the nar...ok, read it. hmmm...if it's supposed to be the narrative type of fiction then i find it wanting of plot. even if the true plot comes later, i still find the supposed prologue unnecessarily lengthy, unless you intent on featuring a journal-writing protagonist.<BR/><BR/>anyway, you know what they say about critics and bitterness. ;pLady Datuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18221064815596772457noreply@blogger.com